The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented diagram depicts the process of electrical generation in a hydroelectric
power
station.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
electricity
is generated through various steps. Use synonyms
According to
the diagram, Linking Words
electricity
is created during the daytime via a flow of Use synonyms
water
from a higher-level Use synonyms
reservoir
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, during sunlight, reversible turbines operate the generator. After the creation of Linking Words
electricity
Use synonyms
water
pumps backwards to a high threshold Use synonyms
reservoir
where the dam is located.
During daylight, when the river is mixed with a high-level Use synonyms
reservoir
, the intake of the Use synonyms
water
is switched on.Use synonyms
As a result
, Linking Words
water
flows to the Use synonyms
power
station generator in order to generate Use synonyms
electricity
by means of reversible turbines that are connected to Use synonyms
power
lines.Use synonyms
Finally
, a low-lever Linking Words
reservoir
is created as the result of the process of generation of Use synonyms
electricity
.
At night reversible turbines pump Use synonyms
water
into a high-level Use synonyms
reservoir
. Use synonyms
Water
flows through Use synonyms
power
lines back to a high-level Use synonyms
reservoir
, where the intake is switched off.Use synonyms
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