The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented diagram depicts the process of electrical generation in a hydroelectric
power
station.
Overall
, the electricity
is generated through various steps. According to
the diagram, electricity
is created during the daytime via a flow of water
from a higher-level reservoir
. Additionally
, during sunlight, reversible turbines operate the generator. After the creation of electricity
water
pumps backwards to a high threshold reservoir
where the dam is located.
During daylight, when the river is mixed with a high-level reservoir
, the intake of the water
is switched on.As a result
, water
flows to the power
station generator in order to generate electricity
by means of reversible turbines that are connected to power
lines.Finally
, a low-lever reservoir
is created as the result of the process of generation of electricity
.
At night reversible turbines pump water
into a high-level reservoir
. Water
flows through power
lines back to a high-level reservoir
, where the intake is switched off.Submitted by hrushik2006 on
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