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The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The two maps below display the developments of the Westley, which have been done over two centuries.
Overall
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, in those years, the town has turned into an urban
area
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 with a sound transportation system from a rural one with agricultural and forest areas.
Firstly
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, both maps clearly show that a railway station and a cinema hall have been built on the lower left side of the
map
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 after removing the fields.
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, the Twine Toll Bridge, with its connected road, has been demolished to make way for a new railroad connecting that station.
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, the road has been extended towards the lower portion of the
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, and the Linton woods, previously located in the
center
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 of the town, have been chopped down and replaced by a new housing estate. At the same time,
the
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Lord Westley's House has been converted into a commercial-residential
area
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.
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, the authority has built a sports
center
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 with a museum and a shopping
center
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 in the place of the Coach Inn and the Church, respectively. Other mentionable developments were the extension of the residential
area
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 on the lower right side of the
map
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 by developing a new business
area
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along with
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 it and the building of a new commercial
area
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 on the bottom side of the
map
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, map with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential area
  • amenities
  • thoroughfare
  • connectivity
  • industrial development
  • factory
  • public amenities
  • recreational facilities
  • educational facilities
  • residential expansion
  • apartment blocks
  • commercial activity
  • shopping centers
  • restaurants
  • single-family homes
  • development
  • open field
  • noticeable change
  • replacing
  • establishment
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