The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The two maps below display the developments of the Westley, which have been done over two centuries.

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, in those years, the town has turned into an urban

area

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with a sound transportation system from a rural one with agricultural and forest areas.

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, both maps clearly show that a railway station and a cinema hall have been built on the lower left side of the

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after removing the fields.

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, the Twine Toll Bridge, with its connected road, has been demolished to make way for a new railroad connecting that station.

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, the road has been extended towards the lower portion of the

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, and the Linton woods, previously located in the

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of the town, have been chopped down and replaced by a new housing estate. At the same time,

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Lord Westley's House has been converted into a commercial-residential

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, the authority has built a sports

center

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with a museum and a shopping

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in the place of the Coach Inn and the Church, respectively. Other mentionable developments were the extension of the residential

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on the lower right side of the

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by developing a new business

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along with

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it and the building of a new commercial

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on the bottom side of the

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, map with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 6 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

213 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

residential area
amenities
thoroughfare
connectivity
industrial development
factory
public amenities
recreational facilities
educational facilities
residential expansion
apartment blocks
commercial activity
shopping centers
restaurants
single-family homes
development
open field
noticeable change
replacing
establishment

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