You took your family to a nearby restaurant.you were disapointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am a regular diner at your
restaurant
on Madison Avenue. I am writing to express my discontent with the meal that I and my family had at your
restaurant
last
Thursday. I am hoping that you
would
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take
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to improve your food quality and maintain your reputation. Recently, I have been promoted to the Senior Internal Auditor in my office and to celebrate
this
event, I took my family out to one of your outlets on Madison Avenue. We ordered four servings of shrimp fried rice, but we were shocked to discover that the shrimp in our serving was undercooked and had a pungent odour. After complaining about it to the supervisor, we were told that the
restaurant
had run out of
shrimps
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- not a valid excuse for a distinguished
restaurant
like yours. You can understand my frustration when my family and I had to leave the
restaurant
empty stomach and
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. My intention in writing
this
letter is to ask you to issue a "show cause notice" to the supervisor at your
restaurant
,
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and disseminate instructions to all your staff to hold a modicum of buffer stock for every item, just in case the
restaurant
runs out of that item and so that no customer experiences a humiliation. Yours faithfully, Muhammad Sameed
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