The bar chart shows the percentages of the Canadian workforce in five major industries in 1850 and 2020.
This
bar graph illustrates the amount of labor
represented in percentages in 5 different work environments Change the spelling
labour
such
as manufacturing, services, agriculture/fishing, construction, and energy
/water
in Canada in 1850 and 2020.
Overall
, in 2020, the highest percentage
of people
were working in services while
in 1850 Manufacturing had a great deal percentage
. In 2020, Agriculture/Fishing and Energy
/Water
had the lowest amount of inhabitants in labor
. The Change the spelling
labour
Energy
/water
industry
had the least amount of employees in 1850 whilst the majority of people
were working in manufacturing in that given period.
In 1850, the manufacturing business was the biggest industry
with 36%. However
, over the next centuries, employees from Canada had a steep decline this
that industry
with an overall
percentage
of only 9% in 2020. Also
, Agriculture/Fishing noticed a major decline in percentage
going from 22% in 1850 to only 1% in 2020. In contrast
, the percentage
of people
working in services substantially increased from 1850 to 2020, 33% and 81% respectively. The Energy
/water
industry
had the least number of people
employed in 1850 and 2020. This
was 3% in 1850 and declined to only 1% in 2020.Submitted by Andrea Barreto on
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