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The graph below shows the amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002.

The graph below shows the amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002.
#amount #goods #uk
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the figure shows the amount of
goods
Use synonyms
 transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002. there are four ways to transport
goods
Use synonyms
such
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 as road, water, rail and pipeline. the most usable way with the highest tones that have been
trasported
Correct your spelling
transported
 is road transportation.
in
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On
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 the other hand, a pipeline is
being
Unnecessary verb
apply
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the rarest choice for transporting
goods
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 which has an average number of transporting
goods
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 below
fourty
Correct your spelling
forty
four
 million tones. the number of
goods
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are
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is
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 gradually
incline
Verb problem
increasing
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 every year
since
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from
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 1974 to 2002,
besides
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 rail mode was
marginally
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a marginally
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 decline between 1978 and 1986.
nevertheless
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, the water mode increased steadily from 1974 till 1994. the rail has been the moderate way to transport
good
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goods
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 since 1974 till nowadays.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • amount
  • transported
  • UK
  • increased
  • significantly
  • 28-year period
  • first decade
  • steady increase
  • significant jump
  • highest point
  • gradual decline
  • minor increase
  • dropped
  • similar level
  • goods
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