The pie charts below show units of eletricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

The pie charts below show units of eletricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
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The diagram illustrates about comparison of the number of units that are produced by fuel sources in both
France
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and
Australia
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in two different years in 1980 and 2000. Both
France
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and
Australia
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provide several types of
power
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energy sources
such
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as coal, oil, natural gas, hydropower, and nuclear
power
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. Coal is the main source in
Australia
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hence
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it took half of total
production
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in 1980 and more than two-thirds of total
production
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in 2000. Coal is dominated as the
Australia
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's main source of
production
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in 2000.
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, coal was not the main option in
France
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but nuclear
power
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took more than half of total
production
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in 2000
instead
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. In 1980 there was a balancing usage in
France
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, with hydropower as the smallest source more than nuclear
power
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and natural gas took a one-third portion as we.
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,
France
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is about to dysfunctional natural gas and hydropower since the total number of its usage extremely decreased in 2000.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words france, australia, power, production with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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