You work in a company and need to take a certain course. Write a letter to you manager and say Explain why you need this training course Where and when you will take it ? How will the company benefits from it?
Dear Johnson,
I am writing
this
letter regarding the course
of basic life support, beacouse
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because
i
want to Change the capitalization
I
do
. In Correct pronoun usage
do it
this
course
they will give Add a comma
course,
the
training Correct article usage
apply
of
CPR and any other accidental problem how we will do the manage.
I would like to tell you about the basic life support training Change preposition
in
course
. Let you know that i
am a nurse and it's very necessary for me Change the capitalization
I
as well as
it's very important every
medical Change preposition
for every
professionals
. Change to a singular noun
professional
Some
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Sometimes
time
patient is sick but no doctor Correct your spelling
the
available
so that the situation a nurse can do Add a missing verb
is available
the
CPR if she Correct article usage
apply
have
Change the verb form
has
a
knowledge Correct article usage
apply
how
we will give the compression .
I want to take the classes from superior college from next month. Change preposition
of how
Also
, i
want to tell you about the benefits Change the capitalization
I
that
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of
this
course
. If the patient suddenly collapse
and no one Correct subject-verb agreement
collapses
available
Add a missing verb
is available
then
i
can do the Change the capitalization
I
life saving
procedure Add a hyphen
life-saving
as well as
you did not hire the new staff for this
purpose because our training teach
me all the things.
I am looking forward to hearing you from Wrong verb form
taught
expacting
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expecting
exacting
you
kind cooperation.
Your's sincerely,
AhmedChange the pronoun
your
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Task Response
Provide specific and clear reasons for needing the training course. Explain how it relates to your job and responsibilities
Coherence and Cohesion
Organize the letter with clear paragraphs and use appropriate linking words to connect ideas.
Lexical Resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary and use professional language related to the medical field.
Grammatical Range
Use a variety of sentence structures, and pay attention to subject-verb agreement and article usage. Also, be consistent with verb tenses.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite