You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The Line Graph illustrates

number

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a number

the number

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of

tourists

visiting different areas in a

european

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European

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country

such

as the

lakes

,

mountains

and

coast

in a

timespan

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time span

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of 20 years. In the late 1980s, 40,000

tourists

prefer to

vist

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visit

the

coast

. There is only

slight

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a slight

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difference between

number

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a number

the number

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of overseas

visitors

visiting

mountains

and

lakes

. In

early

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the early

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1990s, There was a steady

increase

of amount of

visitors

to the

mountains

and

also

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apply

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there

is

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was

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a short dip on amount of

visitors

to the

coast

. Nearly 25,000

tourists

visit both

mountains

and

lakes

. From

early

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the early

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1990s to

late

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the late

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1990s, there

is

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was

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an increasing

number

of

tourists

visiting both the

coast

and the

Lakes

. Little

increase

of

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in

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visitors

to the

mountains

is observed in

this

time frame. From

late

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the late

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1990s,

Number

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the Number

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of

tourists

visiting the

lakes

sky-rocketed and reached its peak in 2002 with almost 80,000

tourists

.

Also

,

constant

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a constant

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increase

in numbers visiting

to

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apply

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the

coast

is recorded and

visitors

visiting the

the

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apply

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mountains

was stable from

late

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the late

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90s to

early

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the early

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2000s with

marginal

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a marginal

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increase

in

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the mid

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mid 2000s

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mid-2000s

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. From 2002 to 2007,

Number

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the Number

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of

tourists

visiting the

lakes

saw a slump

with

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from

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80,000 to 60,000 and a gradual

increase

is

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was

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noticed for the

tourists

visiting the

coast

.