You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The Line Graph illustrates

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number

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a number

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of

tourists

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visiting different areas in a

european

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country

such

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as the

lakes

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,

mountains

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and

coast

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in a

timespan

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time span

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of 20 years. In the late 1980s, 40,000

tourists

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prefer to

vist

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visit

the

coast

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. There is only

slight

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a slight

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difference between

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number

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a number

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of overseas

visitors

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visiting

mountains

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and

lakes

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. In

early

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the early

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1990s, There was a steady

increase

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of amount of

visitors

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to the

mountains

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and

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also

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apply

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there

is

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a short dip on amount of

visitors

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to the

coast

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. Nearly 25,000

tourists

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visit both

mountains

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and

lakes

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. From

early

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the early

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1990s to

late

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the late

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1990s, there

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an increasing

number

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of

tourists

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visiting both the

coast

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and the

Lakes

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. Little

increase

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of

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in

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visitors

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to the

mountains

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is observed in

this

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time frame. From

late

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the late

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1990s,

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Number

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the Number

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of

tourists

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visiting the

lakes

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sky-rocketed and reached its peak in 2002 with almost 80,000

tourists

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.

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,

constant

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a constant

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increase

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in numbers visiting

to

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apply

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the

coast

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is recorded and

visitors

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visiting the

the

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apply

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mountains

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was stable from

late

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the late

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90s to

early

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the early

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2000s with

marginal

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a marginal

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increase

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in

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the mid

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mid 2000s

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mid-2000s

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. From 2002 to 2007,

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Number

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the Number

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of

tourists

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visiting the

lakes

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saw a slump

with

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from

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80,000 to 60,000 and a gradual

increase

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is

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was

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noticed for the

tourists

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visiting the

coast

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.