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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays most
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countries are becoming same in the terms of
products
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 availability with similar qualities from all the places in the world. Though It is somewhat harmful for old traditional
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 at the same time,
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 positive improvements overweight the negative improvements. On the one hand, the developed technologies enable us to live in a world of open trade. It is not impossible to get a Chinese or Indian product in Bangladesh. Because
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 the importing channels are open always.
Besides
, different online business platforms are offering people various goods
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 a cheaper rate.
Additionally
, they offer free shipping service sometimes. Take Aliexpress as an example - If I order an antique pen, It will cost mostly $10. On top of that If I try to purchase It from a local market, It might cost more than $10 and a long waiting period might be faced. So, in terms of trade and business becoming similar is helpful enough for the countries and customers.
Moreover
, governments will earn a sizable revenue from different foreign companies for their import and export activities.
On the other hand
, whether the way of ordering and getting different
products
 is easy, people will not spend their money in local markets.
As a
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 the cash flow will be somewhat declined.
Furthermore
, the availability of foreign
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 will provoke the sellers to enrich their stocks of different
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 which will create a crucial situation for small traders but considering everything the government can help them
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 the money earned as revenue of open trade. It is impossible to keep the economy
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steady without allowing foreign
products
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 the markets. If the legal ways are closed customers will use illegal ways. In conclusion, I must admit that the chance of buying
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products
 from anywhere in the world is a good practice and a positive development for buyers and customers
as well as
 the governments without any doubt.
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Ensure that the introduction and conclusion clearly present the main topic and the writer's position. The introduction and conclusion should be more explicit.
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Make sure to address all aspects of the task prompt, including both positive and negative aspects of the development. Provide a more balanced view and consider the implications for different stakeholders.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

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  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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