The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the current condition and the proposed development of Islip which is the center of a small city. By and large, the city is expected to be fully transformed after changing the layout and addition of new big mall,
building
. Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
Therefore
only school
, Correct article usage
the school
park
, and some shops
that
will remain in the current location.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
To begin
with, the most noticeable different
will be on the main Replace the word
difference
road
. The straight road
from west to east with two additional path
to Change to a plural noun
paths
school
and Correct article usage
the school
park
will be changed into dual
carriageway surrounding the buildings. Correct article usage
a dual
In the
Change preposition
The
center
area where there are only Change the spelling
centre
shops
and housing will be featured with additional infrastructure such
as bus
station,Correct article usage
a bus
Correct article usage
a
car
Correct article usage
a car
park
, and additional housings
. Fix the agreement mistake
housing
moreover
, the main road
among the shops
will be changed into
pedestrians.
Change preposition
for
Therefore
some city features will be remained
in the same location. Change to the active voice
remain
have remained
School
which is located in the southwest will not be moved but will have a little bit Add an article
The school
A school
renovation
. The Change preposition
of renovation
park
in the southeast will not be displaced as well but will be minified. The same thing for shops
in
the east side of the main Change preposition
on
road
, they will not be replaced.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "therefore".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, shops, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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