The table below shows the change in number of people engaged in various physical activities between the years 2001-2009 in Australia (in million people). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data displays the number of people engaged in various physical activities
such
as Running, Aerobic
, Tennis, Cycling and Swimming between the years 2001-2009 in Australia. The table serves Fix the agreement mistake
Aerobics
in
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apply
million
.
In general, in percentage
of Add an article
the percentage
change
, running is the most
biggest Change the adjective
apply
percentage
with 156% change
in eight years, meanwhile
cycling Add a comma
meanwhile,
have
the lowest Change the verb form
has
percentage
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of changes
changes
with -20%, Fix the agreement mistake
change
event
though cycling is one of Correct your spelling
even
most
favourable sport with more than 3 Correct article usage
the most
million
fans.
In 2001, the most popular physical activitiy
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activity
is
cycling with 4.5 Wrong verb form
was
million
enthusiast
, followed by other swimming at 3.7 Change to a plural noun
enthusiasts
million
, Aerobics 1.5
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at 1.5
million
, and running 1.4
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at 1.4
million
. However
, the least favorite physical exercise was tennis with only 1 million
enthusiast
.
In 2009, running became the Change to a plural noun
enthusiasts
most
biggest Change the adjective
apply
percentage
change
with 156% andCorrect article usage
a
slightly
increase from 1.4 Change the word
slight
million
in 2001,
to 1.5 Remove the comma
apply
million
in 2005 and ended with 2.2 million
activis
. Correct your spelling
active
Otherwise
, cycling fans are decrease
from 4.5 Change the verb form
are decreasing
million
in 2001, to 3.1 million
in 2005, and rising to 3.6 million
in 2009. Moreover
, the percentage
of change
is -20% in past
eight years.Correct article usage
the past
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