The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two diagrams show the changes made in the infrastructures of

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Grange

Park

in 1920 and today.

Overall

, we can see that the

garden

has not expanded throughout the years and the only changes that have

made

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were the addition of new renovations like a playing area for children, a theatre and an underground car

park

. During the time the

park

was opened

for

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the public in 1920, the

park

had two entrances from Arnold Avenue and from Eldon Street, where it has not changed up to the present. When entering from Eldon Street, you can see a fountain to the

center

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of the

park

in the old plan; to its left was a stage for music performances. At

present

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the fountain has been replaced by a rose

garden

which

surrounds

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by seats and the stage area has improved for a theatre to hold concerts. When you arrive from

the

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Arnold Avenue, back in 1920, to your immediate left

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a rose

garden

following a pond.

However

, today you see a café where the rose

garden

was and a playground where the pond was.

Moreover

, you can see there’s a pond where the glass house used to be near

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Eldon Street and the entrance to the underground car

park

is near the new water feature.