The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The graph illustrates the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between the
years
1940 and 2040 in three different countries around the world.
Overall
, at first sight, it is clear that
here the proportion of the population is represented in percentages over the years
. In addition
, in 2040 there is a significant progression for the three places.
Sweden and the USA began with approximately 5 and 10 percent in 1940. But in the year 1980, there was an interruption for the USA which lasted 40 years
. Also
, Sweden present an important progression with some slows-down, especially in 1940 and in 2010. So, These two countries demonstrate a notable development.
Japan, has a percentage of 5 in 1940 but instead
of the others it is definitely decreasing by almost 3% for almost 40 years
, between 1940 and 1990. In contrary
, between 1990 and 2030 the graph shows an evolution of 10%. Correct your spelling
contrast
Besides
, in 2030 there will be an exponential expansion growing to 25% in the same year. Furthermore
, the proportion of the population aged 65 and over is significantly growingSubmitted by santos_dij on
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