The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts the differences in the costs of three metals on a monthly basis within the
year
2014.
Overall
, the prices for copper and nickel inclined
Verb problem
increased
while
the cost of zinc increased. By the end of the year
, the metal with highest
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the highest
price
was zinc and nickel had the lowest value.
Starting at 6% in January, nickel was the most valuable metal. From this
peak, in just 5 months
the price
plummeted to -3% in June. This
metal only witnessed a slight growth back to -1% in July then
remained unchanged for the next two months
of August and September. From this
, it dropped to -2% before surging back to 1% in the last
two months
of 2014.
The cost of zinc increased sharply and reached the
peak of 3% in February. During the following Correct article usage
a
months
of the first and second quarters, the price
dropped continuously to the value of -1% and remained relatively the same during the third quarter before soaring to 2% at the end
of the year
.
Copper's price
experienced a more fluctuated change when started at 2% then
gradually decreased to the lowest points of 0.5% in May and June. In July, copper had a slight increase back to 1% and remain
rather stable around Wrong verb form
remained
this
level until the rest of the year
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