The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts the differences in the costs of three metals on a monthly basis within the
year
2014.
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Overall
, the prices for copper and nickel Linking Words
inclined
Verb problem
increased
while
the cost of zinc increased. By the end of the Linking Words
year
, the metal with Use synonyms
highest
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the highest
price
was zinc and nickel had the lowest value.
Starting at 6% in January, nickel was the most valuable metal. From Use synonyms
this
peak, in just 5 Linking Words
months
the Use synonyms
price
plummeted to -3% in June. Use synonyms
This
metal only witnessed a slight growth back to -1% in July Linking Words
then
remained unchanged for the next two Linking Words
months
of August and September. From Use synonyms
this
, it dropped to -2% before surging back to 1% in the Linking Words
last
two Linking Words
months
of 2014.
The cost of zinc increased sharply and reached Use synonyms
the
peak of 3% in February. During the following Correct article usage
a
months
of the first and second quarters, the Use synonyms
price
dropped continuously to the value of -1% and remained relatively the same during the third quarter before soaring to 2% Use synonyms
at the end
of the Linking Words
year
.
Copper's Use synonyms
price
experienced a more fluctuated change when started at 2% Use synonyms
then
gradually decreased to the lowest points of 0.5% in May and June. In July, copper had a slight increase back to 1% and Linking Words
remain
rather stable around Wrong verb form
remained
this
level until the rest of the Linking Words
year
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, price, months with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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