he graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

he graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows information about the average monthly cost fluctuation of copper,
nickel
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, and zinc throughout the year 2014.
Overall
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what stands out from the graph is that there was a downward trend in the prices of all three metals in the first six
months
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. Another striking feature is that
nickel
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started with the highest price but ended up at the lowest point,
whereas
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the opposite was true in the case of zinc. More specifically, the price of
nickel
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plummeted during the first six
months
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, hitting its lowest point at - 3%, after which
this
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figure remained the same from July to September, hovering at - 1 %, followed by a slight increase to 1 % throughout the
last
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two
months
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. As regards Copper, there was the same trend as
Nickel
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, its price decreased by around 2 % in May and June, at which point
this
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figure stayed stably at 1 %,
then
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showed some steady fluctuation throughout the winter, ending up at around 2 %.
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, after the cost of zinc
leaped
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leapt
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at 3 % between February and May,
this
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figure saw a dramatic drop of 4 % in June,
then
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remained static at around 0 % over the next three
months
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, followed by a rise to 2 % in December.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words nickel, months with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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