he graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows information about the average monthly cost fluctuation of copper,
nickel
, and zinc throughout the year 2014.
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Overall
what stands out from the graph is that there was a downward trend in the prices of all three metals in the first six Linking Words
months
. Another striking feature is that Use synonyms
nickel
started with the highest price but ended up at the lowest point, Use synonyms
whereas
the opposite was true in the case of zinc.
More specifically, the price of Linking Words
nickel
plummeted during the first six Use synonyms
months
, hitting its lowest point at - 3%, after which Use synonyms
this
figure remained the same from July to September, hovering at - 1 %, followed by a slight increase to 1 % throughout the Linking Words
last
two Linking Words
months
. As regards Copper, there was the same trend as Use synonyms
Nickel
, its price decreased by around 2 % in May and June, at which point Use synonyms
this
figure stayed stably at 1 %, Linking Words
then
showed some steady fluctuation throughout the winter, ending up at around 2 %.
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In contrast
, after the cost of zinc Linking Words
leaped
at 3 % between February and May, Change the spelling
leapt
this
figure saw a dramatic drop of 4 % in June, Linking Words
then
remained static at around 0 % over the next three Linking Words
months
, followed by a rise to 2 % in December.Use synonyms
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