he graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows information about the average monthly cost fluctuation of copper,
nickel
, and zinc throughout the year 2014.
Overall
what stands out from the graph is that there was a downward trend in the prices of all three metals in the first six months
. Another striking feature is that nickel
started with the highest price but ended up at the lowest point, whereas
the opposite was true in the case of zinc.
More specifically, the price of nickel
plummeted during the first six months
, hitting its lowest point at - 3%, after which this
figure remained the same from July to September, hovering at - 1 %, followed by a slight increase to 1 % throughout the last
two months
. As regards Copper, there was the same trend as Nickel
, its price decreased by around 2 % in May and June, at which point this
figure stayed stably at 1 %, then
showed some steady fluctuation throughout the winter, ending up at around 2 %.
In contrast
, after the cost of zinc leaped
at 3 % between February and May, Change the spelling
leapt
this
figure saw a dramatic drop of 4 % in June, then
remained static at around 0 % over the next three months
, followed by a rise to 2 % in December.Submitted by miatr.work on
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