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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the number of
households
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 in the US across five ranges of
salary
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 per year between 2007 and 2015.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is that the number of
households
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 with an annual
income
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 of over 100000
USD
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 remained the highest in 2007 and 2015. Another striking feature is that
households
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 earning between 25000 to 49999
USD
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 became the highest in 2011. In 2007, the respective number of
households
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 which make less than 20000
USD
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, from 25000 to 49999
USD
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 and 100000
USD
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 or more was 25
million
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, around 27
million
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 and below 30
million
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. Over the following eight years, the figure for
salary
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 range less than 25000
USD
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 and
salary
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 from 25000 to 49999
USD
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 saw a slight increase to around the same point, at approximately 28
million
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. By 2015, the statistic for an annual
income
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 of over 100000
USD
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 rose significantly, reaching a peak at over 33
million
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. The other two ranges of
salary
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 throughout the same period were 75000 to 99999
USD
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 and 50000 to 74999
USD
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. In 2007, there were around 15
million
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 and over 20 respectively. From 2011 to 2015, the figure for
income
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 50000 to 749999 remained fairly stable, hovering at over 20
million
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,
while
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 the figure for the other
income
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 range fluctuated steadily, and levelled off at 15
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, salary, income, usd, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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