These days, more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

In today's world, some men tend to choose

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a caretaker in the household

while

women

are likely to earn

money

.

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essay will look at some primary causes of

this

and provide a few

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opinions below. There are several reasons for more

fathers

to stay at home to take care of their kids

while

women

become the main income in the household. One main cause of

this

issue is gender equality.

To begin

with, because of the development of

society

, some

women

are aware of their rights and values clearly. To illustrate,

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those living in a developing

society

,

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would find job opportunities easier which leads them to earn significant

money

.

As a result

,

women

play as significant a role as men. Another reason that I would like to provide is economic factors.

In particular

,

due to

economic pressure, some

mothers

rush to work to improve their incomes. To illustrate

this

point, some

women

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trading ability tend to become their own business, which brings them significant

money

.

Therefore

,

mothers

are more and more likely to be independent about their finances, which makes them tend to go out to work. In my view, there are several impacts of

this

trend on

society

. The first benefit of the more and more

fathers

who tend to choose

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a caretaker is that their children will get the attention

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both

fathers

and

mothers

.

For instance

, when

fathers

spend time

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care

their

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kids,

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will

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protection which

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them avoid

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potential damage factors from

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society

such

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of sexual abuse and risk of being abused. Another advantage of

this

trend is that some households may balance their finances better.

In particular

, with basic needs pressure

such

as food and living

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,

fathers

and

mothers

can earn

money

together to handle

such

finances

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problems. In conclusion, the trend of some men choosing

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caretakers in the household

while

women

are likely to earn

money

seems to be

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favorable

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progress. In my opinion,

this

tendency