These days, more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

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a caretaker in the household

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are likely to earn

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opinions below. There are several reasons for more

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to stay at home to take care of their kids

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become the main income in the household. One main cause of

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issue is gender equality.

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with, because of the development of

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, some

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are aware of their rights and values clearly. To illustrate,

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those living in a developing

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would find job opportunities easier which leads them to earn significant

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,

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play as significant a role as men. Another reason that I would like to provide is economic factors.

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economic pressure, some

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rush to work to improve their incomes. To illustrate

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trading ability tend to become their own business, which brings them significant

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,

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are more and more likely to be independent about their finances, which makes them tend to go out to work. In my view, there are several impacts of

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trend on

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. The first benefit of the more and more

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who tend to choose

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a caretaker is that their children will get the attention

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both

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and

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spend time

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care

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kids,

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protection which

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potential damage factors from

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of sexual abuse and risk of being abused. Another advantage of

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trend is that some households may balance their finances better.

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, with basic needs pressure

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as food and living

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,

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and

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can earn

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together to handle

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finances

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problems. In conclusion, the trend of some men choosing

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caretakers in the household

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women

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are likely to earn

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seems to be

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favorable

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progress. In my opinion,

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tendency