The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows
percentage
of the British Correct article usage
the percentage
Correct pronoun usage
who visit
visit
Replace the word
visited
Cinema
in 5 Correct article usage
the Cinema
years
range from 1990 to 2010 with 4 different categories of age
.
Overall
, cinema
attendance from different categories of age
tends to have same
pattern every time period. The British who aged 44-54 Change the article
the same
years
old went to cinema
the most with the youngest category (14-24 Add an article
the cinema
years
old) is the least to attend the in every period.
In 1990, approximately 37% of people at
the Change preposition
between
age
of 44-54 visit
the Wrong verb form
visited
cinema
and finish
with the highest point of slightly above 50% of Wrong verb form
finished
cinema’s
visitors in 2010. The least visitors Change noun form
cinema
of
Change preposition
to
cinema
in 1990 came from people at the age
of 14-24 with approximately 15% and remained as
the lowest in 2010 with just above 20%.
The British from 33-44 Change preposition
apply
years
old in 1990 were the second highest of cinema
attendees around 35% and stay
in the same rank in 2010 with above 40%. The second youngest in the Wrong verb form
stayed
age
category (24-34 years
old) started with more than 20% in 1990 and increased around 10% in 2010 to above 30%.Submitted by buttercookies28
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