Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens. Do you agree or disagree?
Someone mentioned that cooking and eating in
people
's houses is better than eating outdoors. In my opinion, I can partially agree with this
statement and this
view will discuss that problem.
To begin
with, cooking and eating in people
's houses help you save more money than in a restaurant. For instance
, a family can cook a piece of beef for a variety of dishes may cost only 50-60 thousand VND. By constant, it may charge them more than a hundred thousand VND for the same dishes in the cafeteria. Moreover
, I believe that homemade dishes could help people
control the number of calories in their health also
each homemade dish is full of vegetables and fruits which can provide lots of nutrition for people
's health.
Furthermore
, having meals together in their own dining room could support relationships with family members rather than going outdoors for lunch and dinner. For example
, they can spend quality time
together when they make food in the kitchen and also
in the dining room. They can talk, discuss, and share information, additionally
, the more time
to spend with each other, the more they can build a greater bond which is more invaluable than spending time
only one or two hours in restaurants. Hence
, I agree that when people
cook and eat at home is better than outside due to
it makes sure your health is guaranteed.
in conclusion, having food at home will reduce cost than in outside. In addition
, spending time
together to help with baking, setting the table and sharing meals at home obviously develops more valuable relationships in the families. Consequently
, I believe that homemade cuisine is a priority for individuals and families to eat out at any restaurant or canteen.Submitted by gipphi147 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task response
Ensure that the essay addresses all parts of the prompt, provide clearer and more relevant examples
coherence and cohesion
Improve the logical progression of ideas and use more transitional phrases for better coherence
lexical resource
Attempt to use a wider range of vocabulary and expressions to enhance the lexical resource
grammatical range
Work on sentence structure, verb tenses, and use of prepositions for improved grammatical range