The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram explains the way in which instant
noodles
are produced.
Overall
, the process consists of eight stages,
begin
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beginning
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with storage silos and
end
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ending
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up with
labelling
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a labelling
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and sealing section. First of all, flour is transferred to the storage silos,
then
flour is put
to
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the mixer machine,
some
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and some
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water and oil are added into the machine. After the second stage, the yield of the
dough
is released and moved to two types of rollers, the first one is to make the
dough
into
dough
sheets
then
the second one is
make
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the
dough
into a strip shape.
Subsequently
,
noodles
in straight shape undergo
cooking
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the cooking
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step and make them to be drying
noodles
disc
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discs
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. In the next stage, dry-cooked
noodles
disc is completed in the cups, in
this
stage vegetables and spices are added.
Finally
, the products undergo the labelling and sealing section and
ready
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are ready
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to distribute to all continents.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles, dough with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Noodle dough
  • Steaming
  • Cutting
  • Dough sheeting
  • Molding
  • Air-drying
  • Frying
  • Seasoning
  • Quality control
  • Packaging
  • Shelf life
  • Flavoring agents
  • Texture
  • Instant meal
  • Convenience food
  • Production line
  • Consumer
  • Ingredient mixing
  • Safety standards
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