The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart below depicts the proportion of Australian citizens actively joining physical activities for both genders in different
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in 2010.
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varied from 15 to over 65 and it is obvious that the percentage of Use synonyms
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, for the other four Linking Words
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from 25 to 64, the proportion of female athletes remained at a higher rate than males.
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On the other hand
, Australian elder male and female citizens saw the same rate of just 46,7% for the former and 47,1% for the latter at the Linking Words
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