The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates information about the
amount
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number
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of households in the US by their yearly income in 3 different
years
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.
Overall
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,
according to
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the information in the chart, annual incomes
are fall
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fall
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into the following 5 different categories.
Also
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in four
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classes
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class
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class,
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there are fluctuations,
while
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those who earn 75,000-99,000 annually
are remain
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are remained
are remaining
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steady for all
years
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In 2015, about 33 million people's annual income hit a high point compared
the
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to the
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other
years
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and profits.
Also
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between 2007 and
2011
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2011,
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there was a significant increase in
figure
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the figure
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of homes which are earn less than 25,000 and 25,000-49,999.
However
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, in 2015 amount of these homes
are representing
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represented
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a decline.
All over
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Over
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the
years
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, there is number of
household
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households
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which is
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has
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always low. It is the 75,000-99,999 yearly profit one. We can see, it has tiny fluctuations and hits the peak of itself in 2015 with 15 million people.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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