The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given line graph illustrates the
number
of people
visiting a museum
on average during summer and winter in 2023. Overall
, in both seasons, the high number
of visitors
was during a mid-day.
Firstly
, in summer, there were approximately 400 tourists who visited the museum
when it was opened at 9am. Then
the number
rose to around 1,200 people
in the next three hours,
and reached the highest Remove the comma
apply
number
of visitors
with a total of 1,400 at 12pm. Furthermore
, the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
visitors
decreased in the afternoon until it was closed at 6pm.
Secondly
, during the winter season, the people
who entered the museum
were least compared to the summer. The museum
was opened at 9am with 200 visitors
. It then
increased in the next hour to almost 600 people
. Additionally
, the number
of people
fluctuated from 10am to 12pm, the peak point was 600 tourists. After that, the number
of visitors
declined from 12pm to 14pm. Moreover
, from 14pm until the museum
was closed, there were not any visitors
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