The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the present layout of the city Islip's
centre
and schemes for its future evolvement.
Overall
, it can be seen that in the future the
centre
of the town will expand, encircled by a new
road
.
Moreover
, its whole appearance will change with the establishment of new housing areas, transport and shopping facilities. In the future, a novel Dual cyclic carriageway will be built, connecting the School and the old Housing areas in the south zone, the Park in the southeast and the new parts of the
centre
, replacing the Countryside in the north. The northeast part of the
road
will have a branch in the west, leading to a street with a New housing area
at the end
.
In addition
, a New
residental
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residential
area will be constructed west
from
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the Park. The Main
Road
will become only for pedestrians. Just above the pedestrian path, in the north, a new Bus station and a new Car park will be constructed, and between them a new Shopping
centre
will be erect, all of them replacing the old Shops.
However
, some of the latter would still be found on the south of the former Main
road
.
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