Many companies and Organisation required employees to wear uniform at work what are advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform?

wearing the unique formal outfits of each government organisation, Companies and
also
schools for employees and students is a law passed.
while
wearing these types of clothes can create a special harmony among
staff
and
also
it has a psychological impact on customers, there might be some drawbacks including wearing the same types of dresses sometimes causes tires and monotonous for
staff
and some bosses often have rigid policies for
this
subject . one evident benefit to wearing a uniform is
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harmony
a harmony
among employees.
According to
the latest research carried out by Scientists having a common point in the middle of a special guest person's example in their work premises influences their mind and
this
reason causes the
staff
to have a special alliance with each other and
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in the efficiency rate of
staff
in
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friendly situation.
As well as
this
, these types of dressing up would definitely have some impact on the clients. Customers with see
such
a situation can understand that
this
organization or company has a special regularity and
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this
subject plays a critical role in having loyal customers. in fact,
this
type of clothing is a sort of advertisement for clients who are not familiar with that place.
On the other hand
, there are obvious disadvantages to wearing the same clothes both in terms of shapes and colours. First of all,
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impact on their
staff
.
According to
the psychological view, seeing similar things through the passage of time can make mental involvement on some groups of persons and
also
based on some
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and their experiences, one thing that
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tires them out is facing
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similar things at
workplace
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such
as special suits and some responsibilities.
Furthermore
, some government organizations and especially some schools have
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on
this
subject. Wearing uniform at work premises for some employers has
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an important role. It is a vital issue for them. So sometimes creates
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tension and stress between employees and employers. By way of conclusion, despite the fact that, despite the facts that there are plus points to wearing the outfits which are determined by the companies, too much would be lost
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