You recently had your computer fixed at a local store however you are not pleased with the service you received write a letter to the store manager in the letter describe the situation explain why you are dissatisfied say what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a regular customer
at
your store, and I am writing to you today to express my disappointment Change preposition
of
from
the service I received from you.
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with
Last
week, I visited the store in order to repair my laptop because it was slow and I could not open some websites.I was told to come back in 2 days and pay a 100$ fee ,which I did happily.
However
,when I arrived to
the shop I Change preposition
at
have been
told that it Wrong verb form
was
is
not ready yet and I Wrong verb form
was
need
to wait 4 hours.Wrong verb form
needed
In addition
, I needed to pay 20$ more.Moreover
, when I arrived home I was surprised that my laptop still has
the same problems,which prevented me from finishing the work I needed to do.
I am expecting you to fix Wrong verb form
had
this
problem and repair my laptop as soon as possible.Besides
, a
compensation for the damage you did to my work is required. For Correct article usage
apply
further
information
you can contact me on my phone 061122334455.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully.
Katty EL.Add a comma
information,
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