Write a letter A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet Describe other household duties you would like your friend to undertake
Dear John,
Thanks for agreeing
for
Change preposition
to
house sitting
for Add a hyphen
house-sitting
couple
of weeks during my vacation Change the article
a couple
and
I am writing Correct word choice
apply
this
to give you some information about my pet along with
few
prominent daily activities for the house.
Correct article usage
a few
Firstly
, I am going to stay in a hotel called "ABC hotel
' and I always carry my mobile with me so, if you need any support please reach out Capitalize word
Hotel
on
my number. In case of urgency, and if you can't reach my mobile, please ring to hotel desk number mentioned below.
Change preposition
to
Secondly
, my cat needs to eat twice a day and please put some biscuits in his bowl along with
water
in his pot those are kept in the kitchen. The food is placed in blue
Correct article usage
a blue
color
box and is on top of Change the spelling
colour
fridge
. Add an article
the fridge
Addition
to that, please make sure to check whether he is Change preposition
In addition
driniking
adequate Correct your spelling
drinking
water
because he is been since gew
weeks.
Correct your spelling
few
Lastly
, please water
the house plants twice a week and plants in garden
need to Add an article
the garden
water
daily. Wrong verb form
be watered
Furthermore
, make sure to switch on the street lights at night time and don't forget to lock the door from inside before you sleep.
We will meet post completion
of my vacation and take Add a hyphen
post-completion
kare
.
Best wishes,
SmithCorrect your spelling
care
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task response
Provide specific details regarding contact details, such as the hotel's contact information and address.
coherence and cohesion
Organize the content in a more coherent manner, and consider using clear paragraph structures to improve the letter's flow.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary and more varied sentence structures to enhance the lexical richness of the letter.
grammatical range
Work on using appropriate punctuation, sentence structures, and verb tenses to improve the grammatical range and accuracy.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite