You have been invited to attend an interview for a place on a course of study at a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot go to the interview at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor. In your letter explain why you cannot keep the appointment apologise and offer to arrange a new appointment ask how long the interview will be, and whether there will be any tests during it

Dear Sir, I am writing to you to inform you that it is not possible for me to attend the
interview
you have arranged for me in your college. First of
all
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I would like to appreciate you for considering me, I have received an email regarding the
interview
you have arranged for me at your university, linking to the course which I want to study
in
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your university but unfortunately, I will not be able to make it
due to
my other commitment on the same day with my doctor for root canal of my tooth.
However
, I really apologize for not keeping up with the call but, I want you to kindly arrange another date for the
interview
, It will be very generous of you.
Secondly
, I
also
want to know that what will be the time duration
for
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the
interview
and
also
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let me know if there will be any
on-going
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assessments during the
interview
. waiting for your positive reply Regards Aliyah Arah
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
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  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • regrettably
  • previous engagement
  • commitment
  • unavoidable
  • sincere apology
  • reschedule
  • accommodate
  • flexibility
  • adequate preparation
  • assessment
  • inconvenience
  • availability
  • alternative appointment
  • invitation
  • admissions tutor
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