It is better to learn the way people lived in the past through films and video records than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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prefer watching a movie over reading about

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through books. A group of

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believe that electronic media is the best channel to upgrade our knowledge about our past

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, culture and

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. I vehemently agree that videos provide better clarity

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will discuss, how films and video records are much better than reading from documents. It goes without saying that audio-visual learning is the best method to teach our younger generations about

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and past culture. In

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day and time, children are tech savvy, the whole world is available to them with a single touch,

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of putting more time into reading, they can watch any documentary on YouTube.

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, by just typing one single work in the search bar they will get heaps of information on the topic they are looking for. I do agree

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written in books and reports comes from well-known and trustworthy sources,

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, these days the younger generation are bit impatient and does not have much interest in reading.

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videography is the best way to keep them connected and educated about our past,

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, reading is possible only for

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who are literate.

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, vlogs and movies help individuals who can not read and by watching electronic media they get to learn about their cultural

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reading about

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, we have to put additional effort into imagining how that era would have been, about clothes, food, and infrastructure but in movies you get to see and learn from it without using your imagination.

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, by watching a movie about the world war or Indian freedom fighters, today’s generation can learn about the sacrifices made by our freedom heroes and their families. In conclusion,

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the written thesis and documents provide us with detailed information

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the time constraint and

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who are uneducated, the audio and video visuals are undoubtedly beneficial.