On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have a travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: 1)describe the lost item. 2)Explain how you lost it 3)Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to tell u that I have bought travel insurance from your company.

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week,my family and I went to Taipei for a summer vacation.We having a great day

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Taipei.Unfortunately,when we were going back to the hotel, I found out that my iPhone 15promax was lost ,I think I lost it on the train when we were going to Hualien. It is very sad for me

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because

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is my birthday present from my husband. Luckily,I found out that travel insurance has one policy that people can claim the cost of anything lost when travelling.So here is my report from Taipei's police station to prove that I lost my iPhone15promax and my insurance number is 000123457.

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is my phone number 0901101421 and my email address is [email protected] you very much in any case,and looking forward to hearing back from you soon. Yours sincerely, JIA HUI

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coherence cohesion

Address the insurance company in a more formal and respectful manner, using 'Dear Sir or Madam' to open the letter.

task achievement

Provide a clear and concise description of the lost item, including its details and value.

coherence cohesion

Organize the content into paragraphs with clear topic sentences and supporting details to improve coherence and cohesion.

lexical resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary, including synonyms and more varied sentence structures, to improve the lexical resource.

grammatical range

Pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to produce a more accurate and varied range of language.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

154 words

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