Your next door owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something be done about the dog

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Dear Mehra, I am writing

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letter to inform you that, your puppy barks a lot and

due to

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this

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it is hard to focus on my studies

as well as

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nobody is able to sleep because the volume of your

dog

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is too loud. I am your new neighbour and my name is Bhawna Soni. I shifted here just a month

before

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ago

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. It is quite annoying that your

dog

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barks in day and night. It disturbs my sleep and I can not focus on my work

while

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my siblings are preparing for university

enterance

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entrance

and the noise is disturbing their studies as well.

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, I request you to take your

dog

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for a walk

everyday

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because they got tired

staying

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of staying

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at the same place.

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, send him to a

dog

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school, where he can understand many words and will

able

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be able

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to understand what you are saying to him. I am looking forward

for

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your position response.

Your

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Yours

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sincerely, Bhawna soni

Submitted by soni.bhawna232 on Fri Nov 10 2023

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task response

Ensure that your response addresses all aspects of the task. In this case, the response should address the issue of the dog barking and its impact, request for action, and a polite request for resolution.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are polite, but the coherence and cohesion could be improved by organizing the letter into distinct paragraphs for better flow of ideas.

lexical resource

The vocabulary and language used are moderately appropriate for the task. Consider using a wider range of vocabulary and more formal language for addressing a neighbor in a letter.

grammatical range

The grammatical range is somewhat limited, and there are some errors in sentence structure and construction. Review the use of tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure for clarity and accuracy.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

160 words

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