The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.

The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
The line chart shows how many
grams
of fast food consumption were eaten each week by British people in the space of two decades(1970—1990).
Overall
,
it is clear that
at the beginning of the period,
pizza
was dominant in
grams
,
however
, both
hamburgers
and fish or
chips
were consumed more than the production of
pizza
after 15 years. Starting with people eating a
pizza
, 300
grams
of them, considerably more than those with
hamburgers
200
grams
.After a decade, there was a marginal fall in the amount of
grams
. Following that,
this
figure for
pizza
remained unchanged across the period.
However
both figures, namely
hamburgers
and fish&
chips
showed a reverse in terms of how much those were eaten.As for
hamburgers
represented the lowest point at about 50
grams
,afterwards there
was
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witnessed a slight rise to 100
grams
by 1985. In 1990, the amount of consumed
hamburgers
grams
reached 300. Regarding fish and
chips
grams
increased to just under 100,
thereafter
, saw growth to 300, and
at the end
of the period, the amount of consumed
chips
and fish
grams
finished at around 500.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, pizza, hamburgers, chips with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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