As a global trade increase, many goods including those we use on a daily basis are producing in another country and have to be transported long distances. Do benefits of this trend outweigh disadvantages?
Globalisation in
this
year's increased and we have many thoughts regarding a wide range of goods
that people use in their daily life,Nevertheless
the biggest part of the products are manufactured in other countries
. In my opinion, there are many disdvantages
than positive effects, Correct your spelling
disadvantages
this
essay will argue that I feel that for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
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One
disadvantages
of Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantage
imports
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importing
goods
from other countries
is the figure of
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worker
will Fix the agreement mistake
workers
decreased
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decrease
be decreased
Also
, the economic trade will experience
down on Verb problem
fall
a
different sectors, Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
such
as electronics creation, clothes producing
etc. Replace the word
production
For example
, The Middle East export
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exports
lot
of Correct article usage
a lot
goods
differently, that
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and
experience
a shortage on the hand workers and Correct subject-verb agreement
experiences
the
aptitudes.
Despite Correct article usage
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this
, there a
number of significant benefits, The Add a missing verb
are a
countries
who
transport Correct pronoun usage
apply
goods
on
an extensive distance, it Change preposition
at
actives
the sectors of Replace the word
activates
transportasion
and the relationship among the Correct your spelling
transportation
countries
, Many economicals benifits
will be added Correct your spelling
economic benefits
such
the
communication sectorChange preposition
as the
,
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and, education
education
system. Correct article usage
the education
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, china
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china's
transfer
items to the world Wrong verb form
transferring
it
has Correct pronoun usage
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a wide benefits
on Correct the article-noun agreement
wide benefits
a wide benefit
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market and Add an article
the global
a global
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new generation Change the word
the
have
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has
a
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such
as creativity, productivity
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and productivity
on a differ
categories.
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into different
To conclude
, although
there are drawbacks, producing goods
on
other Change preposition
in
countries
and imports
items will experience a shortage Wrong verb form
importing
on
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in
a
different categories for the acceptable country. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Furthermore
, it is clearly seen that the benefits of that is
the relationship between The International market will open many facilities and boundries
and Correct your spelling
boundaries
the
global trade will prosper.Correct article usage
apply
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