The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram above illustrates the process of generating electricity using
the
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hydroelectric
power
station
. In order to produce electricity, the
water
will go through 2 types of flow that
passes
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the
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through the
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dam and the
power
station
during the
day
and the night which continues in
cycle
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a cycle
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. During the
day
, the
water
that accumulates in the high-level reservoir will go all the way down passing the dam through the
power
station
that eventually will get into the generator. And
then
, the
power
station
will operate the generator using
it’s
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reversible turbines and
thus
will deliver the electricity within the
power
lines to the national grid. When the night comes, the
water
that
have
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been released to the low-level reservoir during the
day
will be pumped back up by the
power
station
’s turbines and will
arrived
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at the high-level reservoir which is the river. The delivered
water
would not go through the next cycle directly because the dam intake only opens during the
day
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, station, water, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • potential energy
  • mechanical energy
  • electrical energy
  • turbine
  • generator
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • power lines
  • gate-controlled tunnels
  • gravity-driven
  • transformation
  • clean energy source
  • sustainable
  • recycled water
  • mountainous area
  • activate
  • transmit
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