Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Some people believe that elevating the pricing

level

of

gasoline

would be the most effective method to respond

the

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increasing

traffic

and

pollution

issue

,

While

the method can be one of the options to combat the

issue

, I believe that the better response to address the

issue

is by pushing public

transportation

usage as it can solve them

while

causing

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negative outcome. The main goal of hiking the price of

gasoline

is to reduce the

traffic

and

pollution

numbers which are derived from the high

level

of private motorized

vehicle

usage. Increasing the

gasoline

price would not affect the more affluent group of people who still prefer to commute using their own

vehicle

as they still have spare funds for additional expenses.

On the other hand

, those in the lower economic

level

group will suffer more as

this

approach can potentially result in a pricing surge for daily essential products as many business sectors that use

gasoline

as

the

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fuel for their logistics will need to alter their pricing. In comparison, promoting public

transportation

is a better solution to

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the rising

traffic

and

pollution

level

as it can effectively address various aspects of the

issue

.

Firstly

, public

transportation

modes

such

as buses and subways can contain more people in each

vehicle

, meaning that the road will be less packed, resulting in

less

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traffic

jams. In conjunction, the less

vehicle

used

also

translates to less

pollution

.

This

approach may be done by elevating the service quality in terms of comfort and convenience so that the commuters are more attracted and interested

to choose

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public

transportation

.

To conclude

, promoting and elevating the service of

public

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transportation

system is a better solution and response to combat

traffic

and

pollution

issues as it can address the various aspects

while

also

not causing additional issues.