The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » Write at least 150 words.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

» Write at least 150 words.
The following pie graph and table represent worldwide possible causes of land
degradation
and the reasons for 3 regions for the year
of
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1990, respectively.
Overall
,
the
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over-grazing is one of the main reasons
of
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a surge in the areas of unproductive land and Europe has more
underwent
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the
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degradation
than
Ocenia
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Oceania
and North America. Delving into the detail, the productive land mainly
loss
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its effectiveness because of over-gazing and
deforestations
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deforestation
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, representing 35 per
cent
and 30 per
cent
, respectively.
Furthermore
,the cultivation of lands, which is 28 % of all causes, more than the normal degree
also
increases the
numer
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number
of less productive plots. Shifting
focus
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to the table, 23 per
cent
of the areas of Europe endures the
degradation
, and cutting down of
forrest
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forest
Forrest
(9.8%) is
main
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reason behind it. Grazing of agricultural territories by animals leads to the 13 per
cent
degradation
of useful lands of
Oceina
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Oceania
, representing the highest indicator among other factors, 11.3 %.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pie chart
  • Table
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Decreasing productivity
  • Reasons
  • Regional variations
  • Data
  • Summarize
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