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The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county.

The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county.
#line #population #oregon #county
the graph provides information concerning the population in the state of
oregon
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 in three different countries from 1940 to 2000.
at
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 general, the amount of
people
increase
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increases
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 during 60 years period. most
people
 likely live in
washington
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Washington
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 compared to both
colombia
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Colombia
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 and
yamhill
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Yamhill
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. In
washington
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Washington
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, the population growth rose significantly from 75.000
peoples
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people
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 in the beginning and
climb
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 to 120.000
peoples
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people
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then
reach
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reached
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 240.000
peoples
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people
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in
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 the end of
period
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the period
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.
on the other hand
,
people
 in
colombia
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Colombia
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 and
yamhill
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Yamhill
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 show
the
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 similar trend in growth but
a
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are a
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little bit steady compared to
washington
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Washington
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. the less populous country is
colombia
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Colombia
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twith
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with
 around 20.000
peoples
 at
start
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 and went up slightly to 75.000
at the end
,
while
 there was about 30.000
peoples
live
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living
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 in
yamhill
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Yamhill
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 and
lift
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lifted
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 to 90.000 during the period. in
conclution
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conclusion
, the population in Oregon keep rising significantly with the domination of
people
 living in
washington
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Washington
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 compared to other countries.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, washington, peoples with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • Population
  • state of Oregon
  • county
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • significant changes
  • patterns
  • population growth
  • populous
  • population decline
  • steady population growth
  • less populous
  • summarize
  • prediction
  • suggestion
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