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The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012

The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012
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The line graph depicts information about the amount of
coffee
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 that was exported from three different countries over a decade, from 2002 to 2012. after analyzing the chart it is clearly seen that the graph show major fluctuation at the start of the period
however
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 in 2002 the number of
coffee
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 produced by costa rica was larger in ratio
about
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by about
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 15
kilogram
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kilograms
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 after which
coffee
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 export saw
sharp
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a sharp
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 downfall hitting its lowest point and produced 8
kilogram
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kilograms
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 of
coffee
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 beans in the
year
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 of 2016 after that inclined
trend
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 had been seen by it rose quickly and hitting its peak point of producing
coffee
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 in the
last
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year
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moreover
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colombia
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Colombia
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coffee
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 makers show a dissimilar
trend
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 at the start starting from 5kilogram of beans of
coffee
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 despite showing an upward
trend
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 to almost 10 kilo's in the following two
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year
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years
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 it rocked bottom to its lowest before showing a similar pattern like costa rica
coffee
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 exporters latter years of period 
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, in 2002, Brazilian
coffee
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 exports showed an increasing
trend
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 and went up sharply to almost six years, producing more
coffee
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 than the previous two
coffee
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markers
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makers
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 and touching almost 20 kilograms.
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they showed a small downward
trend
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 before hitting their highest point of almost 25 kilograms in the
last
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year
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.
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, after seeing all the trends, it can be vividly seen that there was a large fluctuation, after which Brazilian
coffee
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 makers were in a huge ratio of making
coffee
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,
while
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 the other two showed a downward
trend
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 before reaching their peak level.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, year, trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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