The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012
The line graph depicts information about the amount of
coffee
that was exported from three different countries over a decade, from 2002 to 2012.
after analyzing the chart it is clearly seen that the graph show major fluctuation at the start of the period however
in 2002 the number of coffee
produced by costa rica was larger in ratio about
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by about
kilogram
after which Change to a plural noun
kilograms
coffee
export saw sharp
downfall hitting its lowest point and produced 8 Correct article usage
a sharp
kilogram
of Change to a plural noun
kilograms
coffee
beans in the year
of 2016 after that inclined trend
had been seen by it rose quickly and hitting its peak point of producing coffee
in the last
year
moreover
colombia
Change the capitalization
Colombia
Colombian
coffee
makers show a dissimilar trend
at the start starting from 5kilogram of beans of coffee
despite showing an upward trend
to almost 10 kilo's in the following two year
it rocked bottom to its lowest before showing a similar pattern like costa rica Change to a plural noun
years
coffee
exporters latter years of period
Furthermore
, in 2002, Brazilian coffee
exports showed an increasing trend
and went up sharply to almost six years, producing more coffee
than the previous two coffee
markers
and touching almost 20 kilograms. Correct your spelling
makers
Next,
they showed a small downward trend
before hitting their highest point of almost 25 kilograms in the last
year
.
Overall
, after seeing all the trends, it can be vividly seen that there was a large fluctuation, after which Brazilian coffee
makers were in a huge ratio of making coffee
, while
the other two showed a downward trend
before reaching their peak level.Submitted by abdulahad08600 on
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