The chart below shows the change in three different areas of crime in Machester city centre from 2003-2012.
The line graph illustrates the change in burglary,
car
theft and robbery in the city centre of Manchester from 2003 to 2012.
Overall
, while
burglary dropped significantly, car
theft increased slightly in Manchester city centre over the ten-year period
. However
, robbery remained relatively stable after a decade.
In 2003, Correct article usage
the buglary's
buglary's
value was just below 3,500 which increased to around 3,750 in 2004 before dramatically Correct your spelling
burglary's
decrease
to just above 1,000 over the next four years. Its value rose to roughly 1,500 in 2009 and Wrong verb form
decreasing
then
stayed approximately at this
level in the remaining period
.
Car
thefts, on the other hand
, hovered between around 2,200 and just above 2,000 from 2003 to 2009 before following an upward trend until the end of the period
. In 2006s
, Correct your spelling
2006
car
thefts replaced burglaries as the most significant crime over the next five years. In addition
to this
, robbery's value fluctuated between just under 1,000 and just above 500 throughout the period
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