The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, industries in three countries in 1980 and in 2020
The chart illustrates the distribution of employment among three different areas in three countries in 1980 and 2020.
Overall
, it is evident that agriculture accounted for the vast majority of employment in Country
B
while
the other two countries' workforce mainly consisted of those working in services in both years.
In 1980, around 55% of the workers from Country
B
belonged to farming, which starkly contrasts with Country
A and Country
C
, with only 20% and around 5%, respectively. Meanwhile, 45% and 30% of the employed in Country
A and 70% and nearly 25% of the paying public in Country
C
belonged to the service and industry sector in 1980, respectively.
In 2020, in Country
B
, the share of agriculture reduced to approximately 45%, while
the other two fields, industry and services, saw a significant rise to 40% and just above, respectively. The percentages for those with agricultural expertise in Country
A and Country
C
also
dwindled to nearly 10% and less than 1%, respectively. By contrast
, the employment in services experienced a drastic increase to 55% and 80%, respectively. Lastly
, the portion of industrial workers dipped to 20% in Country
B
, while
the figure for Country
C
remained unaltered at 30% in 2020.Submitted by doable on
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