The chart below show the roth in the population in some of the world's largest cities as well as the population distrubation in urban and rural areas.

The chart below show the roth in the population in some of the world's largest cities as well as the population distrubation in urban and rural areas.
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in the community in some of the world’s huge cities
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population
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giving out in built-up and countryside
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area
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including
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, New
York
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, Shanghai, Bambara, and Jakarta over a period of sixteen years. The growth in the
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is measured in
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(
M
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).
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, the
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number of all five communities increased, albeit to a widely varying degree,
Tokyo
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witnessed a higher rise during 2010. New
York
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experienced
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least rise during a given period.
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the bar graph,
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Tokyo
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population
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increased from 17 (
M
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) to 24 (
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) between 1970 and 1990 and the
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in
Tokyo
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increased to 27.6 (
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) in 2010. New
York
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increased from 12.5 to 26.6 (
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) between 1950 to 2010.
Shanghai
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population
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witnessed an increase from 22.9 (
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).
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Bombay didn’t show that much increase during 1970 and 1990
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increasing from 22 in 1990 to 26.6 in 2010,
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the Bombay
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community witnessed an increase from 4.6 (
M
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) until 2010. The
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growth in Bombay and Jakarta, almost 5.5 times, was higher than any other city listed. The table data shows that in 1950 the most polluted city in the world was New
York
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with 12.5 (
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) residents. London is in 2nd grade with 7.9 (
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) residents and
Tokyo
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is in third grade with 6.5(
M
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).The figure for Paris and Moscow remained fairly stable during
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the 1950
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period.
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the end, over than 3 billion people lived in
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rural
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area
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areas
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during
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1980 to 1990
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less than 2 billion people lived in urban
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area
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. But between 2000 to 2010
population
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of people in the urban
area
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increased from 2.5 (B) to 4(B) and the rural
population
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decreased from almost 0.5 billion
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2000 to 2010.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, area, tokyo, york, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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