The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005.

The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005.
The maps compare the differences in
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New Zealand's area namely Youngsville in 1980 and 25
years
later.
Overall
, the number of
trees
and
houses
were dramatically declined and replaced with other constructions
such
as a stadium, warehouses, factories, and skyscrapers. In 1980, the lake was surrounded by woodland, precisely on the east
side
of the hospital and the north
side
of the watery space.
In addition
, a couple of
trees
also
lined up on the north
side
of River Alanah,
while
a tree between
two
houses
was planted on the south
side
of it, which was changed to a factory building 25
years
later. Most of the
trees
were chopped off in 2005 and replaced with a parking lot on the north
side
of the lake. On the southwest
side
of the region, next to a woodland where
two
factories in 2005 were built, was an unchanged airport which was parted by a road from a small area which had
two
trees
in 1980 which were turned
to
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a factory in 2005. Four
houses
and four
trees
were lined up on the east
side
of that place, with a pair of landed
house
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and a tree
was
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separated by a road on the south
side
of the railway station. In 25
years
, those places were rebuilt as
two
buildings of skyscrapers and a warehouse. A cluster of
houses
was constructed on the northeast of the place which was changed to a stadium with a parking facility 25
years
later.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, trees, houses, side, two with synonyms.
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