The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005.

The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005.
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The maps compare the differences in
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New Zealand's area namely Youngsville in 1980 and 25
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later.
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, the number of
trees
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and
houses
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were dramatically declined and replaced with other constructions
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as a stadium, warehouses, factories, and skyscrapers. In 1980, the lake was surrounded by woodland, precisely on the east
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of the hospital and the north
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of the watery space.
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, a couple of
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also
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lined up on the north
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of River Alanah,
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a tree between
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houses
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was planted on the south
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of it, which was changed to a factory building 25
years
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later. Most of the
trees
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were chopped off in 2005 and replaced with a parking lot on the north
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of the lake. On the southwest
side
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of the region, next to a woodland where
two
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factories in 2005 were built, was an unchanged airport which was parted by a road from a small area which had
two
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trees
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in 1980 which were turned
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a factory in 2005. Four
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and four
trees
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were lined up on the east
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of that place, with a pair of landed
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and a tree
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separated by a road on the south
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of the railway station. In 25
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, those places were rebuilt as
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buildings of skyscrapers and a warehouse. A cluster of
houses
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was constructed on the northeast of the place which was changed to a stadium with a parking facility 25
years
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later.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, trees, houses, side, two with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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