The diagrams below show the plan of a medical centre in 2008 and 2010

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The maps compare the layout of a medical centre as it was in 2008 with a design proposal for the same place in 2010.

It is clear that

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the new proposed design involved making a number of changes to the centre, mainly in the length expansion and the development of new five areas. The most noticeable change was the reduction in the size of the doctor's office coming as the addition of one had been introduced. Looking at the right side, a room was constructed for storing purposes. By 2010, the corridor had been expanded to connect the treatment area and the pharmacy that was newly built beside the laboratory.

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, the staff office, the reception, the waiting room and the main entrance remained the same over a two-year period.

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, the planned building work

also

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contained the addition of a new education and a room for mother and child.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

150 words

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