The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line chart illustrates the average proportion of changes in the costs of three kinds of metals in
percent
during 2014. Change the spelling
per cent
Overall
, there are three types of metal, and the lowest percentage belonged to Nickel’s price Linking Words
at the end
of the year, Linking Words
although
at the beginning it was at the top of the list. Linking Words
Conversely
, the rates of copper and zink fluctuated divergently throughout the whole period, and zinc’s result was the first in the final.
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Initially
, nickel was the highest at 6% compared to zinc’s percentage, which was the smallest figure at 1%. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, nickel’s indicator decreased constantly almost every month. Linking Words
However
, it experienced its lowest point at negative three in June. Linking Words
Besides
, it started growing, but it ended up as the lowest at 1% compared to others.
Referring to information about zinc, it experienced a fluctuation, Linking Words
thus
the lowest index was minus one in June and October, Linking Words
then
it shot up to 2% Linking Words
at the end
of the year. Therewith, copper’s indicator was twice Linking Words
higher
Correct word choice
as high
than
zinc’s at the first time, but it became the first among the others in July reaching 1%. Change preposition
as
Apart from
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this
, its figure appeared to be less than 2%.Linking Words
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