The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The line chart illustrates the average proportion of changes in the costs of three kinds of metals in
percent
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per cent
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during 2014.
Overall
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, there are three types of metal, and the lowest percentage belonged to Nickel’s price
at the end
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of the year,
although
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at the beginning it was at the top of the list.
Conversely
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, the rates of copper and zink fluctuated divergently throughout the whole period, and zinc’s result was the first in the final.
Initially
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, nickel was the highest at 6% compared to zinc’s percentage, which was the smallest figure at 1%.
Nevertheless
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, nickel’s indicator decreased constantly almost every month.
However
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, it experienced its lowest point at negative three in June.
Besides
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, it started growing, but it ended up as the lowest at 1% compared to others. Referring to information about zinc, it experienced a fluctuation,
thus
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the lowest index was minus one in June and October,
then
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it shot up to 2%
at the end
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of the year. Therewith, copper’s indicator was twice
higher
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than
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as
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zinc’s at the first time, but it became the first among the others in July reaching 1%.
Apart from
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this
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, its figure appeared to be less than 2%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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