The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
This
bar chart illustrates the
number
of international
students
, in thousands, from five countries, India, Nepal, Vietnam, Indonesia and Colombia, who are enrolled at three universities.
Overall
, Indian
students
have the highest enrolment numbers
whereas
Colombian
students
have the lowest. Indian
students
make up the highest
number
of
students
at all universities, peaking at around 7,500 at the
University
of Riverview and 6,000 at
Smithtown
University
. The
number
of
students
from Nepal is
also
high but is lower than those from India with 4,000 at both
Smithtown
University
and Earlwood
University
. The
number
of Vietnamese
students
studying ranges from 2,000 at
Smithtown
University
to 3,500 at the
University
of Riverview. Colombian student numbers are low at all three universities with 1,000 or less at each, including an
overall
low of 500 at
Smithtown
University
.
Similarly
, international
students
from Indonesia are
also
low with the highest
number
of
students
from
this
country being around 1,200
students
at the
University
of Riverview.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, university, smithtown with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrolment trends
  • steady increase
  • fluctuating enrolments
  • international student numbers
  • comparative analysis
  • favored choice
  • global economic conditions
  • admission policies
  • program offerings
  • student satisfaction
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