The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The question of whether

science

ought to be targeted

on

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enhancing individuals' life quality has recently sparked a profound debate.

Although

there are some negligible benefits in making scientific

researches

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solely concentrated on human

lives

, I am inclined to agree with the

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that scientists should focus on various areas, considering people's

lives

enhancements an integral part. On the one hand, it is argued by some that every single effort in scientific matters should be dedicated to human

lives'

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improvements. Admittedly, to some

extent

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this

trend can bring benefits for humankind.

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, when scientists solely focused on

this

issue, rather than being interfered with other issues,

such

as

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a new space shuttle or inventing weapons in terms of helping the governments to strengthen their geopolitical position, societies would experience rapid advancements in social health quality, accompanying significant increase in life expectancy. In simpler terms, when

science

dedicated its whole attention to improving

humankind

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lives

,

humanity

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issues, namely poverty and disease would be wiped out on an agile trend.

On the other hand

, I believe that focusing on a specific trend in terms of scientific research might lead to more repercussions, and ignoring other fields of issue brings lag for that specific Country

Science

comprises different aspects, and ignoring any of

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in order to pay more attention to another wield can deteriorate or weaken the foundation of that society. To illustrate, Switzerland which had been

far

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considered a prosperous country with high- level unparalleled levels of welfare and

amenity

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, was attacked by some countries in

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, without being armed with proper weapons. In conclusion,

while

many advocate

this

notion that scientific efforts should be only put

in

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enhancing people's

lives

. I firmly believe that

science

is made up of many other aspects, which should be considered simultaneously to ensure the geopolitical position and security of every society