The graph below shows the number of tourists going to three resorts in a small town from January to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The depicted graph reveals the number of

tourists

who visited three different

resorts

in a small town in a six-month time period (January to June). As can clearly be seen,

ski

resorts

and cross-country

ski

resorts

experienced

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fluctuating attendance,

whereas

the number of campground visitors maintained stability throughout the given time period. The

ski

resort was most popular at the beginning of the year in January, with 8000

tourists

;

in contrast

, campgrounds started with the fewest visitors, with 2000. In the following months,

ski

resorts

exhibited a rapid plunge to 4000

tourists

in April, soon after skyrocketing to its apex of 10000 in May, and remaining at

this

impressive level. Vice versa, cross-country

resorts

opened the season with approximately 3000 people, spiralling upwards to its peak of 10000 in April,

subsequently

shrinking to 6000 in June. Despite that oscillation of popularity, campgrounds only saw a scant rise from January to April, from 2000 to 3500

tourists

, and

afterward

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meager

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meagre

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decline to 3000 until June.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, resorts, ski with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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166 words

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The graph below shows the number of tourists going to three resorts in a small town from January to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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