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The pie charts below show the results of a surveys into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.

The pie charts below show the results of a surveys into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.
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The pie
graph
demostrated
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demonstrated
demonstrates
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the differente
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differente
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different
 types of leisure
activies
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activities
was
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practiced
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 by European adults in 1985 and 1995. The first
graph
 shows five
type
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types
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 of
activies
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activities
activity
,
although
 the
second
graph
 presents one more. In general, the topic "watching TV" did not change a lot with only
2
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a 2
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%
of
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difference,
on the other hand
, "eating outside" had a decrease of 15%
a
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long of these years.  "Playing computer game" showed up as a new category of activity in 1995, it was not in the previous
graph
 and,
in addition
, it got the
second
 position with a little bit over than 25%, before the
second
 position was
occupated
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 by "talking with friends".
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it
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displayed how the
life-style
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lifestyle
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 had
been
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changed with technology
stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
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.
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 the most curious that "talking with friends" had
a
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 increase of 5% between the first survive in 1985 to the
second
 survive in 1995,
otherwise
 "talking with family" had a great decrease of almost 10% less between
two
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the two
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 years. In fact, the
graph
talking
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talks
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 about how the
activies
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activities
had been
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have
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 changed over the years and how one unique thing could change the way
how
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people
could
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live their
lifes
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lives
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, second with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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