The pie charts below show the results of a surveys into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.
The pie
graph
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demonstrated
demonstrates
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the differente
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different
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activities
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practiced
by European adults in 1985 and 1995. The first Change the spelling
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shows five type
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types
activies
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activities
activity
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the second
graph
presents one more. In general, the topic "watching TV" did not change a lot with only 2
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a 2
of
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on the other hand
, "eating outside" had a decrease of 15% a
long of these years.
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graph
and, in addition
, it got the second
position with a little bit over than 25%, before the second
position was occupated
by "talking with friends". Verb problem
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displayed how the Correct pronoun usage
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life-style
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lifestyle
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stuffs
.
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stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
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an
second
survive in 1995, otherwise
"talking with family" had a great decrease of almost 10% less between two
years.
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the two
graph
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activities
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lifes
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lives
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