The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The
given
bar graph illustrates the data of the expenditure of Verb problem
apply
France
and UK
consuming cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras in 2010.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, France
is descripted
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described
with
blue and Change preposition
as
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the Uk
Uk
with orange color. Both the countries Correct your spelling
UK
have
spent the highest on cars Unnecessary verb
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whereas
, UK
spent the lowest on Correct article usage
the UK
the
perfumes Correct article usage
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in contrast
to France
which has least
expenditure on cameras.
The consumer rate is highest for cars in both nations Change the article
the least
that
is 4,50,000 Correct pronoun usage
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pound
for blue and 4,00,000 for orange Fix the agreement mistake
pounds
while
computers have
a little less Verb problem
are
expense
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expensive
in contrast
to vehicles around 3,50,000 to 3,70,000.
Orange has the lowest percentage on
perfumes below 1,50,000 Change preposition
of
whereas
, 2,00,000 for blue. On the other hand
, books are between the average for country blue while
it is slightly higher for France
. Cameras have the
rate of 1,50,000 for Correct article usage
a
France
and 3,50,000 for Correct article usage
the Uk
Uk
.Correct your spelling
UK
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