The diagrams below show how glass containers such as bottles, are pretty used and recycled.
The flow diagrams illustrate the manufacturing and recycling processes of
glass
-made containers like glass
bottles as packaging.
Overall
, the production of the
Correct article usage
apply
glass
containers happens through four steps, starting with mixing, to shaping them. glass
recycling also
has several stages from collecting used glass
to producing new products out of it.
At the first stage
of glass
production, many chemical materials such
as sand, soda ash, and Limestone are mixed. This
composition is then
melted at about 1500 degrees Celsius which is the glass
furnace, getting prepared for shaping by blowing into it. Finally
, glass
containers are made from this
shaped molten glass
.
Through the process of recycling, once used glass
is collected, it is subsequently
put in different groups sorted by their colour. Following
this
, colour-based glass
is purified by being washed. Next,
glass
is crushed and melted in order to prepare for the next stage in which it is moulded into new products.Submitted by z.rajabi on
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